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Chinois Mandarin Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 101, Unité 1, Leçon 2

Décrire les gens

Instructions : Décrivez six personnes différentes en utilisant un mot descriptif positif et négatif: une femme, un homme, un garçon, une fille, vous et moi. Ex: Le garçon est jeune et il n'est pas grand.

外国人 soumission: Evaluation moyenne:
People on this site often ask for my views on love and relationships. I like monogamy, so once I'm in a relationship, there can be no other women in my life. Before that point, though, I must be selective and careful. I have been hurt by a break-up before and don't intend to put myself in that sort of situation again.

I value trust, love, honesty, commitment...all those things that characterize a traditional Asian relationship. Many non-Americans stereotype American relationships as universally unstable and acrimonious, but I think that is a mischaracterization. In any event, I don't represent the typical American at all.

I am especially attracted to Asian (especially Chinese) women. Part of this is (I think) innate, and part is logical. My physical attraction is probably natural and unavoidable. But I also admire the typical Asian work ethic, intelligence, monogamy, etc. I'm not afraid to admit that one benefit of coming to this site is to meet Chinese girls.
Submitted over a year ago

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Corrections

  • aniion
    Mochapoints: 432  |  score d'enseignant: 74 (0%)
    sorry,My english is really poor.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • tomspost
    Mochapoints: 74  |  score d'enseignant: 10 (0%)
    very good
    Submitted over a year ago
  • 外国人
    Mochapoints: 319  |  score d'enseignant: 35 (0%)
    I hope it's really good--I'm an American!
    Submitted over a year ago
  • 阿八
    Mochapoints: 1801  |  score d'enseignant: 564 (0%)
    pretty good! maybe god wants us to meet a few wrong people before meeting the right one so that when we finally meet the right person, we will know how to be grateful for that gift. good luck
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Susan
    Mochapoints: 1431  |  score d'enseignant: 309 (0%)
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Susan
    Mochapoints: 1431  |  score d'enseignant: 309 (0%)
    It's wonderful.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Lilly
    Mochapoints: 339  |  score d'enseignant: 184 (0%)
    Submitted over a year ago
    Orthographe:
  • Lilly
    Mochapoints: 339  |  score d'enseignant: 184 (0%)
    Very good! Just now I emailed you my comment on Livemocha. Please check!
    Submitted over a year ago
  • sak
    Mochapoints: 134  |  score d'enseignant: 34 (0%)
    how about Vietnamese girls? Do you have any vision of them?thanks for accepting my add request
    Submitted over a year ago
  • sak
    Mochapoints: 134  |  score d'enseignant: 34 (0%)
    how about Vietnamese girls? Do you have any vision of them?thanks for accepting my add request
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Avril
    Mochapoints: 402  |  score d'enseignant: 70 (0%)
    I hope u can be happy forever.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • shirley
    Mochapoints: 434  |  score d'enseignant: 38 (0%)
    good luck here,i hope you are not daunt by hurt
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Elise
    Mochapoints: 1090  |  score d'enseignant: 359 (0%)
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Andy_xiaodu
    Mochapoints: 3067  |  score d'enseignant: 1338 (0%)
    It is so funny for your paragraph, and I believe that you are not typical American. I am very happy that you like Chinese traditional culture and ethic. So I have noting to do but keep my fingers crossed for you. Good luck. I have a sugesstions for you why don't you live in Chinese. Indeed, there are so many chances for you.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • 玥玓瓅
    Mochapoints: 4903  |  score d'enseignant: 3659 (0%)
    If you are learing Chinese you should express yourself in Chinese.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Mr.Nee
    Mochapoints: 888  |  score d'enseignant: 265 (0%)
    In chinese, It will be good!
    Submitted over a year ago
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    Compétence:
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  • baby jimmy
    Mochapoints: 1371  |  score d'enseignant: 562 (0%)
    SORRY I DON NOT HAVE A GOOD ENGLISH
    Submitted over a year ago
  • V {独孤求败}
    Mochapoints: 127923  |  score d'enseignant: 127479 (90%)

    好
    Ce contenu nécessite le lecteur Adobe Flash Player.
    Obtenir Flash string(11) "transparent"
    Submitted over a year ago
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