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Chinois Mandarin Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 101, Unité 1, Leçon 6

Professions

Instructions : Décrivez les professions de quatre personnes : une femme, un homme, vous et moi. Utilisez des phrases positives et négatives. Ex. : Je suis étudiant. L'homme est médecin; il n'est pas professeur.

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Women shi xuesheng, bu shi yisheng. Ta shi jingguan, bu shi gonggong qiche siji. Zhege nvren shi hushi. Nage nanren shi wo de tongshi.
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  • Never Give Up
    Mochapoints: 12977  |  score d'enseignant: 9610 (97%)

    good.

    请用汉字书写。

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  • Hongli
    Mochapoints: 12677  |  score d'enseignant: 5218 (100%)

    wo men shi xue sheng, bu shi yi sheng. Ta shi jing guan, bu shi gong gong qi che si ji. zhe ge nv ren shi hu shi. na shi ge nan renshi wo de tongshi.

    Chinese pinyinThe first letter not capitalized!!!

    Great job!!!

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  • liangxiongqi
    Mochapoints: 8703  |  score d'enseignant: 1036 (89%)

    wo men shi yi wei xue sheng , bu shi yi sheng, ta shi  jingguan yi wei  yisheng, bu shi gonggong pi che si ji,  zhe ge nvren nan ren shi hushi  yi wei lao shi, Na  na ge nan ren cai shi wo de tong  lao shi .

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  • Joseph
    Mochapoints: 21570  |  score d'enseignant: 10370 (94%)

    很好Robert 继续加油.

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  • Isabel
    Mochapoints: 2380  |  score d'enseignant: 405

    every single word take a sit

    don't like this "women",it should be "wo men"

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  • jump26
    Mochapoints: 7598  |  score d'enseignant: 627 (100%)

    very good!

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  • Sophie
    Mochapoints: 1010  |  score d'enseignant: 262 (0%)

    I agree  Hongli!!!

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  • gxdbeanbeaneye
    Mochapoints: 4750  |  score d'enseignant: 2858 (100%)

    Well done. Now I give you my Chinese about writing.

    我们是学生,不是医生。他是警官,不是公共汽车司机。这个女人是护士。那个男人是我的同事。

    and I also record my voice for you. you could refer what I speak.

    Ce contenu nécessite le lecteur Adobe Flash Player.
    Obtenir Flash string(11) "transparent"
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  • 幽幽
    Mochapoints: 15650  |  score d'enseignant: 2204

    Very good.In Chinese you can write them down like this:

    我们是学生,不是医生。他是警官,不是公共汽车司机。这个女人是护士。那个男人是我的同事。

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  • 幽幽
    Mochapoints: 15650  |  score d'enseignant: 2204

    Very good.In Chinese you can write them down like this:

    我们是学生,不是医生。他是警官,不是公共汽车司机。这个女人是护士。那个男人是我的同事。

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  • tonydeng
    Mochapoints: 5581  |  score d'enseignant: 654 (100%)

      Hi~Robert! Long time no see, How are you doing recently!~ The practice is well done, I think of it~Just if you writed it by Chinese, I consider is better!

    Wo men shi xuesheng, bu shi yisheng. Ta shi

     我    们    是     学 生j,   不  是    医 生。 他  是Jingguan, bu shi gonggong qiche siji.

      警官,     不   是    公  共        汽车  司机。Zhege nvren shi hushi.  Nage  nanren shi  wo

      这个    女人     是  护士。 那个     男 人    是   我

    de   tongshi.

    的      同 事。

    Okay, Robert!~ I hope it can help you~

     

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  • 卜果
    Mochapoints: 6462  |  score d'enseignant: 1503

    great~ keep doing~hehe

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  • Crystal
    Mochapoints: 3551  |  score d'enseignant: 654 (100%)

    good a job!

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  • Steven Lee
    Mochapoints: 8931  |  score d'enseignant: 1827 (75%)

    very good ! keep it on

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  • freemum555
    Mochapoints: 441  |  score d'enseignant: 267

    so beautiful

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  • freemum555
    Mochapoints: 441  |  score d'enseignant: 267

    so beautiful

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  • freemum555
    Mochapoints: 441  |  score d'enseignant: 267

    so beautiful

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  • freemum555
    Mochapoints: 441  |  score d'enseignant: 267

    so beautiful

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  • william Brennem...
    Mochapoints: 14702  |  score d'enseignant: 3433 (94%)

    Good job! and you can learn the words as follow.

    我们是学生,不是医生。他是警官,不是公共汽车司机。这个女人是护士。那个男人是我的同事。

    and you'd better write these words like this.

    wo men (we) xue sheng (students) yi sheng (doctor) jing guan (police offericer) gong gong qi che si ji (bus driver) zhe ge(this) nv ren(woman) na ge (that) nan ren (man) tong shi (colleague)

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  • eason.run
    Mochapoints: 2276  |  score d'enseignant: 185 (0%)

    good job

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  • Cathy
    Mochapoints: 333  |  score d'enseignant: 123 (0%)

    perfect, keep working!

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  • bluself
    Mochapoints: 771  |  score d'enseignant: 421 (100%)

    Try to use Chinese spelling

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  • Candy
    Mochapoints: 1245  |  score d'enseignant: 226 (100%)

    很好...Very good!!

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  • brave heart
    Mochapoints: 4381  |  score d'enseignant: 722 (100%)

    great!

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  • brave heart
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    great!

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  • brave heart
    Mochapoints: 4381  |  score d'enseignant: 722 (100%)

    nin  neng shi yong han zi ma ?

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  • brave heart
    Mochapoints: 4381  |  score d'enseignant: 722 (100%)

    nin  neng shi yong han zi ma ?

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  • James
    Mochapoints: 15395  |  score d'enseignant: 2902 (100%)

    buen trabajo! But when you spell the pinyin, pay attention to the intervals. see:

    Wo men shi xue sheng, bu shi yi sheng. Ta shi jing guan, bu shi gong gong qi che si ji. Zhe ge nv ren shi hu shi. Na ge nan ren shi wo de tong shi.

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  • Zibs
    Mochapoints: 14655  |  score d'enseignant: 3870 (0%)

    You probably have reasons of work-flow for the pinyin, but I couldn't help wanting to share these...sorry, I just get excited & have to share 'em with someone! -http://www.chinese-tools.com/tools/ime.html (no-download-or-diacriticals character entry)

    also www.chineseetymology.org (wonderfully easy-to-get-at character etymology)

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