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Chinois Mandarin Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 101, Unité 1, Leçon 5

Décrire des objets

Instructions : Décrivez les objets que vous avez appris dans cette leçon. Utilisez des attributs positifs et négatifs. Ex. : Il y a cinq édifices. Deux édifices sont verts. Trois édifices ne sont pas verts. Ils sont noirs.

Robert soumission: Evaluation moyenne:
Zhe shi yi ge nv hai, bu shi nan hai. Wo zai zhoi ji shang kan san ben shu. Tamen shi shei de? Ta bu ting si ge hai zi chang ge. Zai wo qian bian you yi liang qi che. Ta shi jin huang se de. Wo you wu duo hua. Ni mei you hua. Wo ba liang duo hua gei ni, hou bu hou?
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  • Freeman
    Mochapoints: 11389  |  score d'enseignant: 1147 (99%)

    Zhe shi yi ge nv hai, bu shi nan hai. Wo zai zhoi ji shang jiao / ke shi li kan san ben shu. Tamen shi shei de? Ta bu ting si ge hai zi chang ge. Zai wo qian bian you yi liang qi che. Ta shi jin huang se de. Wo you wu duo hua. Ni mei you hua. Wo ba liang duo hua gei ni, hou bu hou hao bu hao?

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  • Freeman
    Mochapoints: 11389  |  score d'enseignant: 1147 (99%)

    ... Zai wo qian bian mian you ...

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  • charlesdeng
    Mochapoints: 3451  |  score d'enseignant: 2202 (100%)

    zhoi (it is wrong, there is no such pinyin in Chinese)   Zhoi ji,  ---You may mean 'zhuozi'

    "Ta bu ting si ge hai zi chang ge"

    Can you tell me in English what you mean?

    Do you mean "He does`t listen to the four children`s singing"?

    hou bu hou  should be"hao bu hao"

    pay attention  to  the difference between

    "ao "and "ou"

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  • william Brennem...
    Mochapoints: 14702  |  score d'enseignant: 3433 (94%)

    Tamen shi shei de?

    if you mean whose are those books,

    you should write"Ta men shi shui de?"

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  • Lisa Gong
    Mochapoints: 12569  |  score d'enseignant: 554 (100%)

    Ta bu ting si ge hai zi chang ge.

    i think your meant that 'she is song all along'

    If it is ,you can say' ta bu ting de zai chang ge. come on!!  Robert!

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  • eason.run
    Mochapoints: 2276  |  score d'enseignant: 185 (0%)

    good!

    zhe shi yi ge nv hai,bu shi nan hai.wo zai zhuo zi shang (zai jiao shi li)kan san ben shu. ta men shi shui de? Ta bu ting si ge hai zi chang ge.ta bu zai wo qian bian(mian) you yi liang qi che.ta shi jin huang se de.wo you wu duo hua. ni mei you hua.w ba liang duo hua gei ni,hou bu hou(hao bu hao?=all right?)

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  • eselle
    Mochapoints: 114  |  score d'enseignant: 10 (0%)

    zhe shi yi ge nv hai, bu shi yi ge nan hai.wo zai zhuo ji shang kan jian san ben shu.ta men shi shui de? ...........wo ba liang duo hua gei ni,hao bu hao?

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  • eselle
    Mochapoints: 114  |  score d'enseignant: 10 (0%)

    zhe shi yi ge nv hai, bu shi yi ge nan hai.wo zai zhuo ji shang kan jian san ben shu.ta men shi shui de? ...........wo ba liang duo hua gei ni,hao bu hao?

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  • gxdbeanbeaneye
    Mochapoints: 4750  |  score d'enseignant: 2858 (100%)

    very good! but I have a few suggestions here.

    Zhe shi yi ge nv hai, bu shi nan hai. Wo zai zhoi ji  zhuo zi shang kan san ben shu. Ta men shi shei de? Ta bu ting si ge hai zi chang ge. Zai wo qian bian mian you yi liang qi che. Ta shi jin huang se de. Wo you wu duo hua. Ni mei you hua. Wo ba liang duo hua gei ni, hou hao bu hou hao?

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  • Hanson
    Mochapoints: 12347  |  score d'enseignant: 1381 (0%)

    Hi, Robert, good job, but there also have some mistakes. I agree with your friend charlesdeng 's advice. Keep it up.

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  • Ronaldo
    Mochapoints: 8253  |  score d'enseignant: 3066 (0%)

    Sorry, but I do not understand this language.

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  • lydiayuan
    Mochapoints: 227  |  score d'enseignant: 28 (0%)

    sorry,i didnt notice your require earlier.

    it seems that your tiny mistakes have been pointed out by other chinese friends.so there is no need for me to talk about them any more.

    just keep trying! i believe you'll have much more progress in no time!

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  • brave heart
    Mochapoints: 4381  |  score d'enseignant: 722 (100%)

    Zhe shi yi ge nv hai, bu shi nan hai. Wo zai zhoi ji zhuo zi bian shang kan san ben shu. Tamen shi shei de? Ta bu ting si ge hai zi chang ge. Zai wo qian bian you yi liang qi che. Ta shi jin huang se de. Wo you wu duo hua. Ni mei you hua. Wo ba liang duo hua gei ni, hao bu hou? hao

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  • 杜衡 Victor
    Mochapoints: 155  |  score d'enseignant: 46 (0%)

    最后的hou bu hou是不是想说,好不好呢?

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  • wendy
    Mochapoints: 5170  |  score d'enseignant: 857 (0%)

    Zhe shi yi ge nv hai, bu shi nan hai. Wo zai zhoi ji zhuo zi shang kan jian san ben shu. Tamen shi shei shui de? Ta bu ting si ge hai zi chang ge. Zai wo qian bian you yi liang qi che. Ta shi jin huang se de. Wo you wu duo hua. ,Ni ni mei you hua. Wo ba liang duo hua gei ni, hou bu hou hao bu hao? 这是一个女孩,不是男孩。我在桌子上看见三本书,它们是谁的?他不听四个孩子唱歌。在我前边有一辆汽车。它是金黄色的。我有五朵花,(comma not period here)你没有花。我把两朵花给你,好不好?

    very good!especially the last sentence“Wo you wu duo hua. Ni mei you hua. Wo ba liang duo hua gei ni, hou bu hou?” although some incorrect, it covered four types of sentence. well done!

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  • James
    Mochapoints: 15395  |  score d'enseignant: 2902 (100%)

    Wo zai zhuo zi shang kan shu.

    Ta men shi shui de?

    Ta mei you ting jian si ge hai zi zai chang ge.

    hao bu hao

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  • Sarah
    Mochapoints: 892  |  score d'enseignant: 30 (0%)

    Zhe shi yi ge nv hai, bu shi nan hai. Wo zai zhoi ji (zai zhuo zi )shang kan san ben shu. Tamen shi shei de? Ta bu ting si ge hai zi chang ge. Zai wo qian bian you yi liang qi che. Ta shi jin huang se de. Wo you wu duo hua. Ni mei you hua. Wo ba liang duo hua gei ni, hou bu hou? (hao bu hao)

    It needn't to get capital letter in chinese.

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