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Anglais Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 102, Unité 5, Leçon 2

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Ali soumission: Evaluation moyenne:
I like to go for electronic shopping center. I need information about new technology and computer. Internet and computer is inseparably of my life and can not live without them. Since I woke up in morning, I am connected to the internet until after midnight. How about you? which kind if shopping center you like to go?
Submitted over a year ago

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  • megpt
    Mochapoints: 15550  |  score d'enseignant: 11886 (100%)
    Submitted over a year ago
    Orthographe:
  • megpt
    Mochapoints: 15550  |  score d'enseignant: 11886 (100%)
    I like to go *to the* electronic*s* shopping center (or centre, if you're English). I need information about new technology and computer*s*. *The* Internet and computer*s are an essential part* of my life and *I* can not live without them. I am connected to the internet *from when* I *wAke* up in morning until after midnight. How about you? Which kind Of shopping center you like to go *to*?
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    Submitted over a year ago
  • dolphin582
    Mochapoints: 637  |  score d'enseignant: 82 (0%)
    I like to go shopping AT electronic shopping centre. I need information about new technology and computers. Internet and Computers ARE AN inseperable PART of my life and I cannot live without then. Since I wake up in the morning I am connected to the internet until after midnight. How about you? WHAT kind of shopping centre DO you like to go TO? very good ALI only 7 mistakes today
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Kate
    Mochapoints: 958  |  score d'enseignant: 285 (0%)
    Very good! "I like to go TO THE electronic shopping center. I need information about new technology and COMPUTERS, AS THE Internet and computers ARE AN IMPORTANT PART of my life and I COULD not live without them. Since I WAKE up in the morning, I am connected to the Internet until after midnight. How about you? Which kind OF shopping DO you like to go to?
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Ali
    Mochapoints: 848  |  score d'enseignant: 40 (0%)
    thanks for encourage me.
    Submitted over a year ago

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