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Anglais Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 201, Unité 8, Leçon 3

Décrivez votre journée

Instructions : Utilisant le vocabulaire des leçons, décrivez votre voyage, votre travail ou vos études. Combien de temps est-ce qu’il faut pour y aller ? Est-ce que c’est loin ou près ? Combien cela coûte il pour y aller ?

Irina soumission: Evaluation moyenne:
My family is not big. We are four peoples. My father, my mother, my sister and me lives in our house. My sister is older. She is 24 years old. Besides I have many cousin,two uncles and
aunts,but they don`t live with us.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • alan kaplan
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    Good job Irina, After each comma, there should be a space before you start writing the next word.

    You can also write it like this:

    My family is not large, We are four people, my father and mother, my sister and I live together. My sister is older than me, she is 24 years old. I also have two uncles and aunts and many cousins but, they don't live with us.

    My family is not big, we are four people s. My father, my mother, my sister and I me live s in our house. My sister is older. She is 24 years old. Besides them I have many cousins, two uncles and aunts, but they don`t live with us.

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  • tylerdurden
    Mochapoints: 1760  |  score d'enseignant: 254 (0%)

    .... and I live in our house.Besides them I have many cousins..........

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  • Sandy
    Mochapoints: 209  |  score d'enseignant: 100 (0%)

    1) My Family is not big. We are four people. We are a small family of four - 5/10

    2) My father, my mother, my sister and me I live in our house. - 8/10

    3) My sister is older. She is 24 years old. My older sister is 24 years old

    4) Besides I have many cousins, two uncles and aunts, but they don't live with us. - 8/10

    I hope this helps :-)

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  • suripto dahlan
    Mochapoints: 8839  |  score d'enseignant: 5034

    very good, Irina,

    My family is not big. We are four peoples. My father, my mother, my sister and (me) I live(s) in our house. My sister is older. She is 24 years old. Besides I have many cousins, two uncles and aunts, but they don`t live with us.

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  • Coldfire
    Mochapoints: 3634  |  score d'enseignant: 2075 (99%)

    ok

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  • Michael-Todd
    Mochapoints: 6376  |  score d'enseignant: 4443 (0%)

    "My father, my mother, my sister, and I live in our house."

    Don't forget that when you are making a list as such, it is plural.  You are talking about multiple people or things.  The first person singular form of "to live" is "live."  :)  Don't forget the comma before the "and".

     

    "I also have many cousins and two uncles and aunts, but they don't live with us."

    "Besides" doesn't work in this context.  It doesn't make any sense at all actually.  You should use "also" instead, as I have shown.  Don't forget to pluralize "cousins" too.  :)

    Good job all in all.  If you ever get on Skype at a time that I'm also on, we can work on your English more!!  I miss you!  You should send meh your Skype name in a message.  :)

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  • Paul
    Mochapoints: 12886  |  score d'enseignant: 2307 (100%)

    Good job :)

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  • @ Riku
    Mochapoints: 9127  |  score d'enseignant: 7890 (100%)

    Good Job Irina..

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  • ceXhc
    Mochapoints: 3502  |  score d'enseignant: 962 (100%)

    My family is not big. We are four peoples. My father, my mother, my sister and me lives in our house. My sister is older. She is 24 years old. Besides I have many cousin,two uncles and aunts,but they don`t live with us.

    My family is not big. There are four of us. My father, my mother, my sister and I live in our house. My sister is older. She is 24 years old. Also I have many cousins, and two uncles and aunts, but they don't live with us.

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  • kevin lewis bro...
    Mochapoints: 140  |  score d'enseignant: 10 (0%)

    well done

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  • Elihu
    Mochapoints: 1473  |  score d'enseignant: 1265 (0%)

    great corrections they gave you:)

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  • crm
    Mochapoints: 7785  |  score d'enseignant: 3043 (100%)

    I think a useful expression here is "There are four of us in my family"

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  • freecudi
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    My family is not big. We are four peoples. My father, my mother, my sister and me lives in our house. My sister is older. She is 24 years old. Besides I have many cousin,two uncles and aunts,but they don`t live with us.

    My family is not big. There are four of us. My father, my mother, my sister and I live in our house. My sister is older. She is 24 years old. Also I have many cousins, and two uncles and auntsbut they don't live with us.

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