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Anglais Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 101, Unité 2, Leçon 4

Décrire les coiffures

Instructions : En utilisant à la fois des attributs positifs et négatifs, décrivez les coiffures de six personnes : une femme, un homme, une fille, un garçon, vous et moi. Ex. : La jeune fille n'a pas les cheveux courts. Elle a les cheveux longs.

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Today is Tuesday, I am worked. On the evening of today, my general manager, my fellow and I are going to shopping.
My general manager has a white beard and short black hairt. My fellow does not have long red hairt, but she has short glad hairt.
Submitted over a year ago

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Corrections

  • ESLBruce
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    You can use one of the verbs, but not both. You could have: Tomorrow is Saturday, but I must work. (A native speaker would probably use "have to" instead of "must") OR Tomorrow is Saturday, but I will be working.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Eliz
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    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Eliz
    Mochapoints: 12201  |  score d'enseignant: 10323 (100%)
    Hello Demi! Good try! you may write also in this way 'Tomorrow is Saturday, but I have to go to work.' Keep on the good work. Ciao ciao! Eliz
    Submitted over a year ago
  • ESLBruce
    Mochapoints: 8290  |  score d'enseignant: 4672 (100%)
    Looks like time expressions are being translated from Chinese . Today is Tuesday, I am WORKING. Tonigh, my general manager, my fellow-worker and I are going to shopping. My general manager has a white beard and short black hair. My fellow does not have long red hair, but she has short black(?) hair. I'm not sure what glad hair (notice there is not a "t' on the end of hair) means. I am guessing that you may have meant black hair, unless you meant a glad heart.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Eliz
    Mochapoints: 12201  |  score d'enseignant: 10323 (100%)
    Good Try Demi! Most of the corrections had been done by your friend. Keep on the good work. Cheers Eliz
    Submitted over a year ago

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