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Anglais Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 201, Unité 8, Leçon 2

Les activités quotidiennes

Instructions : Utilisant le vocabulaire de ce leçon, décrivez vos activités quotidiennes et à quelle heure vous les faites. Exemple : Je me brosse les dents avant sept heures. Je pars pour le bureau à huit heures. Je me couche après onze heures du soir.

murat soumission: Evaluation moyenne:
My favourite meal is a Turkish Doner. I like it so much. Because it is really tasty and good. The Turkish doner is made from meat. İtis ok.
Submitted over a year ago

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Corrections

  • Ashley
    Mochapoints: 2293  |  score d'enseignant: 322 (100%)
    This is really good! I just have two suggestions - you might want to combine the second and third sentences - "I like it so much because it is really tasty and good." And the last sentence should be "It is ok." But that might have just been a typo, if so just ignore this comment.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Saifu
    Mochapoints: 6191  |  score d'enseignant: 5484 (0%)
    Beautiful
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Saifu
    Mochapoints: 6191  |  score d'enseignant: 5484 (0%)
    Beautiful
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Jenny
    Mochapoints: 1556  |  score d'enseignant: 183
    good. ;p
    Submitted over a year ago
  • jj
    Mochapoints: 2566  |  score d'enseignant: 1007 (0%)
    1. My favourite meal is a Turkish Doner. Perfect! In USA English, favourite = favorite. You use the British spelling of the word. 2. I like it so much. Because it is really tasty and good. = I like it so much because it is really tasty and good. (Because is a conjunction, or a word that connects thoughts and sentences.) Thank you for writing about this. It sounds very good. I had not heard the word "Doner" before. We grill meat on spits, especially in the summer, in the United States.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Shirkutza
    Mochapoints: 1014  |  score d'enseignant: 192
    Submitted over a year ago
    Orthographe:
  • Kathy0215
    Mochapoints: 1363  |  score d'enseignant: 1211 (0%)
    My favorite meal is a turkish doner. I liek it so much because it is really tasty and good. The turkish doner is made from meat , it is ok.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • 一切随缘
    Mochapoints: 377  |  score d'enseignant: 51 (0%)
    very good
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Kanyanush
    Mochapoints: 867  |  score d'enseignant: 393 (0%)

    good !!~
    Submitted over a year ago

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