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Anglais Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 202, Unité 10, Leçon 1

Décrivez vos vêtements

Instructions : Utilisant le vocabulaire des leçons, décrivez les vêtements que vous portez maintenant. Décrivez le tissu. Qu’est-ce que vous portez pour le travail ? Qu’est-ce que vous portez quand vous allez à une soirée ? Quel est votre ensemble favori ?

Svetlana soumission: Evaluation moyenne:
I am from Sevastopol, Ukraine.. If you are going to Sevastopol, I recommend to visit this site http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sevastopol and
http://foto.sevastopol.info/eindex.html
Sevastopol is on the coast of peninsula Crimea .
There are many landmarks and parks there.
I recommend to visit Balaclava Bay, where is very nice view and Chersoneses, which was Greek city in 529/528 BC. Swallow’s Nest is one of landmarks also. It is a monument of architecture and located on the rock above the Black See.

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  • CharlieR
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    Very Good!

    ........Sevastopol is on the coast of the Crimean peninsula. There are many landmarks and parks there. I recommend a visit to Balaclava Bay, where there is a very nice view, and Chersonesus, which was a Greek city between 528 and 529 B.C. Swallow's Nest is also one of an interesting landmark. It is a monument of architecture and is located on a rock above the Black Sea.

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  • Gilgy
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    If you are going to Sevastopol, I recommend to visit [visiting] this site

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Athlete61
    Mochapoints: 21539  |  score d'enseignant: 19080 (100%)

    Svita,

    As always, wonderful work. Watch the spelling and articles.

    1. ... I recommend that you visit this site...

    2. ... on the coast of the Crimean peninsula.

    3. ... I recommend that you visit Balaclava Bay, where there is a very nice view.... OR... , which has a very nice view

    4. The Swallow's Nest is...

    5. It is an architectural monument... Black Sea.

    Ed

     

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  • TomM
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    I am from Sevastopol, Ukraine.. If you are going to Sevastopol, I recommend to you visit this site...

    Sevastopol is on the coast of the Crimean peninsula.

    I recommend to  you visit Balaclava Bay, where there is very nice view and Chersoneses, which was a Greek city in 529/528 BC.

    Swallow’s Nest is one of the landmarks also.]

    It is a monument of architecture and located on the a rock above the Black See.

     

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