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Anglais Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)
Cours 102, Unité 5, Leçon 2
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I have many errands to do. I prepare my self to be in college at 9:30 am because of my seminar. Also I must to call my sister to arrange her graduate party. I think I forget most important errand. I must go to hospital with my friend Sara to visit our friend Hani, he failed last night from his home roof. I hop he be come will. Sorry friends I want to complete my writing but I have to go. I have many errands to do.
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*I must call to my sister, to arrange her graduate party
*I think, I have forgotten the most important errand
*I must go to the hospital..................., he FELL of his window, last night.
*I hope he gets well soon
*sorry friends, i want to complete this paragraph, but i have to go now.
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Very interesting writing Hydrangea! It was entertaining to read.
my self = myself (one word)
Also I must to call my sister to arrange her graduation party. I think I forgot the most important errand. I must go to the hospital with my friend Sara to visit our friend Hani, he failed fell last night from his home roof the roof of his home. I hope he be come will will become well. Sorry friends I want to complete my writing but I have to go. I have many errands to do.
I agree with sasha.
good job!!
Good night Hydrangea,
I have many errands to do. I prepare my self (myself) to be in college at 9:30 am because of my seminar. Also I must to call my sister to arrange plan her graduation party. I think I forgot the most important errand. I must go to the hospital with my friend Sara to visit our friend Hani, he failed fell last night from his home roof. (better: last night he fell from his home roof) I hope he be come gets well soon. Sorry friends I want to complete my writing but I have to go. I have many errands to do.
Nice text!