Mon panier de provisions
Instructions :
Utilisant le vocabulaire de ce leçon, décrivez ce qu’il y a normalement dans votre panier de provisions. Dites aussi la quantité des choses. Ex : Deux cartons de lait, quelques légumes, une douzaine d’œufs.
I went Shirdi & Shani Shingnapur on last vacation with my friends for 2 days. These are the holy place for Hindu's. It costs around Rs. 300-350 per person. Generally, It costs more to live for 2 days there but, we stay at friends home, also didn't purchase any vehicle because its my friends native place and he arranged bikes us.
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Anglais Ecrit exercice 
I went Shirdi & Shani Shingnapur with my friends for 2 days on last vacation with my friends for 2 days. These are the holy place for Hindu's. It costs around Rs. 300-350 per person. Generally, it costs more to live there for 2 days there but, we stayed at a friend 's home house. Also we didn't purchase rent any a vehicle because it's my friends native place and he arranged bikes for us.
Here are my suggestions. As you see, there were just a few places where it could have been worded better. Keep practicing! Good job! \o/
Hi Nishant interesting written exercise! Sally indicated phrases you need to review. Anyhow, I think you should mention THIS IS the Holy.....(Unless they are many). My friend please take into account that when Learning a Language is very important to maintain the same level in Oral and Writing! Best Wishes and happy Weekend. Nancy Aida
Sorry Nishant! You were right mentioning "These are Hindu´s Holy places", since Shirdi & Shani are different places and both are in Shingnapur? correct?. Regards, Nancy Aida
Very good!
I went Shirdi & Shani Shingnapur on my last vacation with my friends for 2 days. These are the holy places for Hindu's. It costs around Rs. 300-350 per person. Generally, It costs more to live stay for 2 days there but, we stayed at my friend's home. Also, I didn't purchase any vehicle have to pay for any transportation because its my friends native place and he arranged bikes us.