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Anglais Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 202, Unité 9, Leçon 5

Vos dernières vacances

Instructions : Décrivez vos dernières vacances. Quel est l’endroit où vous avez passé vos dernières vacances ? Quels sont les activités et les sites que vous conseillez à d’autres vacanciers ?

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My last vacations where in summer of 2007. It was unforgettable. I and my friends from university visited Crimea peninsula. We were living in good living-conditions on the coast of Black Sea. Also we were learning a history of Sebastopol - great city of Russian history.This journey was wonderful!
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  • Leonardo
    Mochapoints: 2060  |  score d'enseignant: 171 (0%)
    My last vacations take place in the summer of 2007. My friends and I (from the university).... We were staying in a comfortable place beside the coast of ... well done Paul.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • fjolla
    Mochapoints: 11843  |  score d'enseignant: 717
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  • Immonique
    Mochapoints: 9658  |  score d'enseignant: 5959 (35%)
    My last vacation was in the Summer of 2007. My friends from university and I, visited the Crimea...... We ha good living conditions on the coast of The Black Sea. We were also learning the history of Sebastopol, a great city of Russian history. That journey was wonderful!
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Athlete61
    Mochapoints: 21539  |  score d'enseignant: 19080 (100%)
    Paul, Хорошо. 1. My last vacation was in the summer of 2007. 2. My friends from the university and I visited the Crimea Peninsula. 3. We had good living conditions (no hyphen)... 4. Also we learned about the history of Sebastopol... 5. This is a very minor comment to explain the subtleties of english... "This trip was wonderful" is more informal and implies a vacation or travel for enjoyment. "Journey" is often used to describe a trip where one discovers something or where things unfold. "Journey" is also more often used in literature rather than spoken english. Great work! Ed
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  • Dave
    Mochapoints: 8031  |  score d'enseignant: 7299 (99%)
    "My last vacation was in the summer of 2007. It was unforgettable. My friends and I from the university visited the Crimea peninsula. We had (very) nice accomodations on the coast of the Black Sea. We learned the history of Sevastopol, a great city of Ukraine and an important city in Russian history. The trip was wonderful!"
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  • Rebecca
    Mochapoints: 687  |  score d'enseignant: 100 (0%)
    Nice work! Just a few errors. :) блага! (I think that's right. hehe)
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  • Ron English
    Mochapoints: 155473  |  score d'enseignant: 144309 (99%)
    Paul, I am going to rewrite this for you. It's OK but needs a few minor changes. My last vacation was in the summer of 2007. It was unforgettable. My friends and I, from the university, visited Crimea Peninsula. We had good living-conditions on the coast of Black Sea. Also, we were learning the history of Sebastopol, the great city of Russian history. This journey was wonderful!
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  • likuna66
    Mochapoints: 19224  |  score d'enseignant: 5957 (93%)

    bien :)
    Soumis 4 il y a des mois
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