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Anglais Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 201, Unité 8, Leçon 4

Décrivez un endroit dans votre ville

Instructions : Utilisant le vocabulaire des leçons, décrivez un grand boulevard dans votre ville. Quelle sorte de bâtiments et d’entreprises est-ce qu’il y a dans la rue ? Où est-ce qu’ils se trouvent dans la rue ?

RICHARD soumission: Evaluation moyenne:
Because of my profile picture, sometimes people misunderstand that I'm younger than my real age
I took the picture about three years ago and now I'm in my mid-thirties.
If you look up and down the picture, you'll find it's natural to think so.
In the picture, I have a round face.
I have my hair cut shortly and it's color is black.
My hair isn't parted but is handled like that of little boys.
And more, I wear a red colored casual shirts.
As you see, I almost don't have facial hair and actually I can count even the number of my beard now. It's a kind of inborn thing.

Telling the truth, I pleased to hear that I look young, but sometimes to be seen old as my age is the better especially when I'm in my business.
Submitted over a year ago

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Corrections

  • ::Sandra::
    Mochapoints: 10133  |  score d'enseignant: 2261 (0%)
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • ::Sandra::
    Mochapoints: 10133  |  score d'enseignant: 2261 (0%)
    well done, Richard.. Your english is very good
    Submitted over a year ago
  • ::Sandra::
    Mochapoints: 10133  |  score d'enseignant: 2261 (0%)
    well done, Richard.. Your english is very good
    Submitted over a year ago
  • ::Sandra::
    Mochapoints: 10133  |  score d'enseignant: 2261 (0%)
    well done, Richard.. Your english is very good
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Carlim Barroso
    Mochapoints: 371  |  score d'enseignant: 15 (0%)
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Carlim Barroso
    Mochapoints: 371  |  score d'enseignant: 15 (0%)
    very good !!!
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Loren Bergeson
    Mochapoints: 4387  |  score d'enseignant: 2459 (100%)
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Loren Bergeson
    Mochapoints: 4387  |  score d'enseignant: 2459 (100%)
    The first few sentences were perfect, so I don't repeat them. Suggested corrections follow. I'm not sure what you mean by "I can count even the number of my beard now" My hair isn't parted but is styled like that of little boys. Futhermore, I wear red colored casual shirts. As you see, I almost don't have facial hair and actually I can count the number of hairs in my beard. It's a kind of genetic thing. To tell the truth, I am pleased to hear that I look young, but sometimes to be seen as old as my age is better especially in my business.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Loren Bergeson
    Mochapoints: 4387  |  score d'enseignant: 2459 (100%)
    I'm sorry, in my previous post I said you needed to replace "inborn" with "genetic". I checked my dictionary, and "inborn" is indeed correct: "It's a kind of inborn thing". I should be more careful and check my dictionary more often.
    Submitted over a year ago

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