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Anglais Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 202, Unité 10, Leçon 5

Décrivez les outils chez vous

Instructions : Listez quelques outils que vous avez chez vous. Que sont-ils ? Où est-ce que vous les avez achetés ? Est-ce que vous les utilisez souvent? Quel outil avez-vous utilisé le plus récemment et pourquoi?

Sonia Sambra soumission: Evaluation moyenne:
Today is wednesday, 2009 april 22, autumn season. The weather is cloudy (maybe it rains later), not so cold (at least to me), the temperature will be oscillating between 17° and 24° degrees in São Bernardo do Campo, São Paulo state.
Tomorrow, as i can see on this site: ctmail@climatempo.net , it will be similar today.
Well... i must confess that i appeciate too much this kind of weather and the autumn season too.
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  • Graham
    Mochapoints: 618750  |  score d'enseignant: 584418 (100%)

    Today is Wednesday, April 22nd 2009 april 22, and it is autumn season. The weather is cloudy (maybe it will rain later), not so cold (at least to for me), the temperature will be oscillating between 17° and 24° degrees in São Bernardo do Campo, São Paulo state. Tomorrow, as I can see on this site: ctmail@climatempo.net , it will be similar to today. Well... I must confess that I really appreciate too much this kind of weather and the autumn season too.

    Good effort.

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  • Daniel
    Mochapoints: 5309  |  score d'enseignant: 1506

    It's autumn season and today is Wednesday 22nd April, 2009. The weather is cloudy (it will probably rain later), not too cold (at least for me), the temperature will be varying between 17° and 24° degrees in São Bernardo do Campo, SP.  Tomorrow, the weather will be sililiar to todays' as predicted on the website:ctmail@climatempo.net ,  Well... I must confess that I really love  this kind of weather and the autumn season.

    Hope you like this style of writing.

    Daniel

     

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  • Daniel
    Mochapoints: 5309  |  score d'enseignant: 1506

    It's autumn season and today is Wednesday 22nd April, 2009. The weather is cloudy (it will probably rain later), not too cold (at least for me), the temperature will be varying between 17° and 24° degrees in São Bernardo do Campo, SP.  Tomorrow, the weather will be sililiar to todays' as predicted on the website:ctmail@climatempo.net ,  Well... I must confess that I really love  this kind of weather and the autumn season.

    Hope you like this style of writing.

    Daniel

     

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Daniel
    Mochapoints: 5309  |  score d'enseignant: 1506

    It's autumn season and today is Wednesday 22nd April, 2009. The weather is cloudy (it will probably rain later), not too cold (at least for me), the temperature will be varying between 17° and 24° degrees in São Bernardo do Campo, SP.  Tomorrow, the weather will be sililiar to todays' as predicted on the website:ctmail@climatempo.net ,  Well... I must confess that I really love  this kind of weather and the autumn season.

    Hope you like this style of writing.

    Daniel

     

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Daniel
    Mochapoints: 5309  |  score d'enseignant: 1506

    It's autumn season and today is Wednesday 22nd April, 2009. The weather is cloudy (it will probably rain later), not too cold (at least for me), the temperature will be varying between 17° and 24° degrees in São Bernardo do Campo, SP.  Tomorrow, the weather will be sililiar to todays' as predicted on the website:ctmail@climatempo.net ,  Well... I must confess that I really love  this kind of weather and the autumn season.

    Hope you like this style of writing.

    Daniel

     

    Submitted over a year ago
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