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Anglais Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 102, Unité 5, Leçon 4

Décrire des objets, des animaux et des personnes

Instructions : Utilisez les nouveaux adjectifs de cette leçon pour décrire les activités de six objets, animaux et personnes. Ex. : Le vieil éléphant lourd est assis dans un endroit propre et tranquille.

lavoisier.bruno soumission: Evaluation moyenne:
I did in the house of the friend , I uploaded some heavy box , I did put the box in the room of the my friend.
After I saw my brother putting the small and light boxe on the table.
My mother leaves always the house clean and odoriferous all day.
My twins brother is well quiet , she help the my mother clean house.
My father is much big , he work all day ...
My big book are on the dirty table.
My big dog left the house much dirty , after my mother cleaned again.
My big and light bag and small and dirty shirt on the sofa.
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  • jojoyaya
    Mochapoints: 1832  |  score d'enseignant: 170 (0%)

    very good!

    Submitted over a year ago
  • elar
    Mochapoints: 468  |  score d'enseignant: 322 (0%)

    I did in the house of the friend , I uploaded some heavy box , I did put the box in the room of the my friend. After I saw my brother putting the small and light boxe on the table. My mother leaves always the house clean and odoriferous all day. My twins brother is well quiet , she help the my mother clean house. My father is much big , he work all day ... My big book are on the dirty table. My big dog left the house much dirty , after my mother cleaned again. My big and light bag and small and dirty shirt on the sofa.

    I do not understand exactly what your first sentence is trying to say. Try this:

    I went to my friend's house. I lifted a heavy box and put it in my friend's room. Later, I saw my brother putting a small, light box on the table. My mother always leaves the house clean and fresh smelling every day.  My twin brother is quiet and he helps my mother clean the house. My father is big. He works all day.  My big book is on the dirty table. My big dog left the house dirty. Afterward, my mother cleaned the house again. My big, light bag and my small, dirty shirt were on the sofa.

     

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  • kol46
    Mochapoints: 24745  |  score d'enseignant: 4041

    Muito bem! Nao tenha medo de errar, eh errando que se aprende. As correcoes ja foram feitas. Continue assim, voce esta no caminho certo.

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  • RICARDO SANTANA...
    Mochapoints: 20412  |  score d'enseignant: 10628 (89%)

    Very good. Study and practice a little more.

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