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Anglais Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 101, Unité 1, Leçon 3

La description des objets

Instructions : En utilisant l'une positive et une déclaration négative, décrire six objets (une voiture, une fleur, une pièce de monnaie, un arbre, une maison, un sac). Ex. La maison est noire. Elle n'est pas blanche.

faith soumission: Evaluation moyenne:
i have a house,it is new,it's yellow.the before door is green,it isn't yard.it have many folewers before the house.
Submitted over a year ago

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Corrections

  • KZ
    Mochapoints: 2381  |  score d'enseignant: 1620
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • KZ
    Mochapoints: 2381  |  score d'enseignant: 1620
    Instead of saying "it is new, it's yellow", you can combine them e.g. "it is new and yellow". "Before door" should be "front door". "It isn't yard" - better to say "it doesn't have a yard.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • ker
    Mochapoints: 19  |  score d'enseignant: 15 (0%)
    how about this: I have a new house which is painted in yellow and the front door is green. It doesn't have a yard but has many flowers infront of the house. We mostly use the word before when we refer to dates... ^_~ Good luck... I always say practice makes perfect!
    Submitted over a year ago
  • ResidentX
    Mochapoints: 2799  |  score d'enseignant: 2348 (100%)
    I have a new yellow house with a green door with many flowers in front of it.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • ResidentX
    Mochapoints: 2799  |  score d'enseignant: 2348 (100%)
    I have a new yellow house with a green front door and many flowers in the front yard.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • x3m
    Mochapoints: 430  |  score d'enseignant: 155 (0%)
    "I have a house. My house is new and yellow. The front door is green. There is no yard. I have many flowers planted in front of the house."
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Don.......傅堂诺
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  • Don.......傅堂诺
    Mochapoints: 9827  |  score d'enseignant: 5207 (0%)
    Hello Faith. Let me start out by saying this submission refers to the past. All these comments that you are getting are referring to the present. So I will write how it should be in "past tense". My house was new. It was yellow and the door was green. It did not have a yard, but it had many flowers in front of the house. If you need more help with the "tenses" (past, present, and future) please contact me :-)))) Keep up the hard work.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • SONGJI
    Mochapoints: 590  |  score d'enseignant: 15 (0%)
    this sounds a little better if you say. I have a yellow house with a green door,in the front of the house there are many flowers.
    Submitted over a year ago

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