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Anglais Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 101, Unité 1, Leçon 5

Décrire des objets

Instructions : Décrivez les objets que vous avez appris dans cette leçon. Utilisez des attributs positifs et négatifs. Ex. : Il y a cinq édifices. Deux édifices sont verts. Trois édifices ne sont pas verts. Ils sont noirs.

Luciano Santos soumission: Evaluation moyenne:
Three buildings is not gree.This candle in red and black.This candle in not white.Twelve towels is white and soft. The cake is brown.Five dogs,two girls and four boys. I like cakes.
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  • chelsea19fan
    Mochapoints: 10436  |  score d'enseignant: 3848 (100%)
    three buildings are not green. this candle is not white. twelve towels ARE white and soft. this candle is red and black. at least write THERE ARE dogs two girls and four boys.
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  • PriscillaFace
    Mochapoints: 2352  |  score d'enseignant: 730 (0%)
    I likes cakes too! *Three buildings ARE not GREEN. This candle IS red and black. This candle IS not white. Twelve towels ARE soft and white. THERE ARE five dogs, two girls, and four boys." Muito bom, Luciano!
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  • welton geraldo
    Mochapoints: 26055  |  score d'enseignant: 15543 (100%)
    Three buildings ARE(são) not(aren't) green. This candle is not white. Twelve towels ARE white and soft. (There are) dogS two girls and four boys. Está indo muito bem.
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  • ParacetaMAN
    Mochapoints: 6221  |  score d'enseignant: 1051
    Correções: * Three buildings ARE not GREEN. ("are", não "is". Faltou um N no final de GREEN) * This candle IS red. This candle IS not white. (IS, não IN) * Twelve towels ARE white. De resto tá ok. Não esqueça: o verbo SER/ESTAR em inglês é sempre ARE quando no plural. Então, se tem mais de um: "Twelve towels ARE white" (doze toalhas SÃO brancas). "Three buildings ARE not green" (três prédios não SÃO verdes) Dica: na negativa, ARE NOT pode ser abreviado assim: AREN'T (essa é a forma mais usada, ouça a pronúncia dela que eu te gravei) Keep it up, friend! Qualquer coisa, tamos aí.
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    Obtenir Flash string(11) "transparent"
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  • ElvisAndre
    Mochapoints: 1625  |  score d'enseignant: 212 (0%)
    You did well, but I found fews mistakes. Three building ARE not GREEN. This candle IS red and black. This candle IS not white. Twelve towels ARE white and soft.
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  • FiSa
    Mochapoints: 1630  |  score d'enseignant: 668 (0%)
    Nice work in this one!! Go ahead!
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  • Renan Barbosa
    Mochapoints: 1427  |  score d'enseignant: 331 (0%)
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  • Gu$t@v0
    Mochapoints: 487  |  score d'enseignant: 383 (0%)
    bem................ na parte "This candle in red and black(...)", vc cometeu um engano. veja: o correto é dizer: This candle IS red and black... vc trocou o verbo por ima preposição. aahh......... outro "mistake"... na parte "Three buildings is not gree(...)", os edifícios (buildings) estão no plural (THREE buildings).......... então o verbo deve seguir isso! então, a forma correta é "Three buildings ARE not(...)"......... o mesmo erro foi cometido na parte "Twelve towels is white (...)"......... o verbo segue a "inclinação".......... bem.....mas eu acho q é só........ vc foi muito bem! parabéns!
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  • Gu$t@v0
    Mochapoints: 487  |  score d'enseignant: 383 (0%)
    ei......... eu não me recordo bem.......... mas RATING não é com 2 t's??
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