Se connecter avec Facebook
Avez-vous oublié votre mot de passe ? Je n'ai pas de compte
Vous resterez connecté pendant seuleument 2 semaines

Anglais Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 201, Unité 8, Leçon 1

Décrivez où se trouve votre ville et votre pays

Instructions : Utilisant le vocabulaire de ce leçon, décrivez où se trouve votre ville et votre pays. Quels pays se trouvent au nord, au sud, à l’est, et à l’ouest de votre pays ? Où se trouve votre ville dans le pays ? Décrivez les villes qui se trouvent au nord, au sud, à l’est, et à l’ouest de votre ville.

shelleytu soumission: Evaluation moyenne:
My name is Shelleytu, of course, shelley is not my Chinese name, but i think every english learner should get a english name. Then you know, i come from China,a country that has a long and colorful history and is developing very fast. I am learning english, not just because that we have english exams, actually i love learning foreign languages and i love english very much.I'm trying my best to make as many foreign friends as possible to improve my english.
Submitted over a year ago

Veuillez vous connecter pour corriger cet exercice.

Se Connecter



Corrections

  • .............
    Mochapoints: 7086  |  score d'enseignant: 1753 (0%)
    Submitted over a year ago
    Orthographe:
    Compétence:
    Grammaire:
  • Don Moore
    Mochapoints: 285884  |  score d'enseignant: 283797 (100%)
    Shelley, this is very well done. You must capitalize the personal pronoun "I" and you should add a space after a comma and two after a period. See!! Very few changes. Oh and you should capitalize words such as English.
    Submitted over a year ago
    Orthographe:
    Compétence:
    Grammaire:
  • kromm
    Mochapoints: 40039  |  score d'enseignant: 35442 (100%)
    Terrific exercise in English, just the minor changes by Don Moore. Very good expression in your story.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • v
    Mochapoints: 947  |  score d'enseignant: 205 (0%)
    Learn from what Don Moore has highlighted. Well Done!!
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Parker
    Mochapoints: 2469  |  score d'enseignant: 1988 (0%)
    My name is Shelleytu. Of course, shelley is not my Chinese name, but I think every English learner should get a English name. *As* you know, I come from China; a country that has a long and colorful history and is developing very fast. I am learning English, not just because that we have English exams,*but* I actually love learning foreign languages and I love English very much. I'm trying my best to make as many foreign friends as possible to improve my English. Great work! Only punctiation...You write very interesting exercises.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • edward
    Mochapoints: 16269  |  score d'enseignant: 11979 (100%)
    I am from China and my English name is Shelleytu. I think that every Chinese student learning English should have an English name. I am learning English because I love studying foreign languages, and not just because of the pending English exams. I also hope to make many foreign friends and improve in that way. China is developing very fast, and has a long and colorful history and I am proud to be Chinese. Well this is just another way of saying same thing. You already have great reviews. Keep it up. you are doing so well with such a good presentation. jia you jia you
    Submitted over a year ago
    Orthographe:
    Compétence:
    Grammaire:

Conseils pour de bonnes corrections.:

Soyez précis
  • Faites des suggestions utiles et donnez des exemples.
  • Écrivez plus que de simples remarques comme «bon travail» ou «Nécessite encore du travail».
Faites les corrections
  • Use the editing features to apply strikethrough, bold or different font colors.
  • Utilisez le clavier virtuel pour insérer des caractères spéciaux dans vos révisions.
Teach by Example
  • Réviser un exercice oral en enregistrant votre propre commentaire audio.
  • Concentrez-vous sur une bonne prononciation et les exemples oraux.