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Anglais Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 201, Unité 8, Leçon 3

Décrivez votre journée

Instructions : Utilisant le vocabulaire des leçons, décrivez votre voyage, votre travail ou vos études. Combien de temps est-ce qu’il faut pour y aller ? Est-ce que c’est loin ou près ? Combien cela coûte il pour y aller ?

Lina soumission: Evaluation moyenne:
The trip from northern to southern St. Petersburg takes between one and two hours. It is about 44 km.
The subway ticket in St. Petersburg costs 20 rubles. There are trams in St. Petersburg. The tram ticket costs also 20 rubles. Today, I watched video about trams. In 60-ies tram ticket was cost 4 kopecks (1 ruble has 100 kopecks). Children lower one meter were going by tram free. The growth of the children measured in the tram:)
The bus ticket costs between 20 and 50.
Today 1 USD = 29 RUB and 1 EUR = 40 RUB. How much does transport cost in your town?
Submitted over a year ago

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  • Terry35
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    The tram also costs 20 rubles. Today, I watched a video --.

    In the 60tes, a tram ticket cost---. Children shorter than one meter could go on the tram free. The height of the children was measured on the tram.The bus ticket cost between 20 rubles and 50 rubles.

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  • CharlieR
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    Very good and creative!

    .... A subway ticket in St. Petersburg costs 20 rubles. There are trams in St. Petersburg, too. A tram ticket also costs 20 rubles. Today, I watched a video about trams. In the 60's, a tram ticket was cost 4 kopecks (1 ruble has 100 kopecks). Children lower shorter than one meter were going went by tram for free. The growth height of the children was measured in the tram. :) A bus ticket costs between 20 and 50 kopecks. Today 1 USD = 29 RUB and 1 EUR = 40 RUB. How much does transport cost in your town?

    В Сиэтле автобус и трамвай стоят семьдесят копеек. Я должен жить в Санкт Петербурге! (Рядом с кварирой Лины, конечно.)

    Happy St. Patrick's Day!

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  • chipbray
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    Very nice composition, Lina!

    Charlie R's comments are perfect

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  • rogozhin1972
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    The trip from northern (ALSO CORRECT: NORTH) to southern (SOUTH) St. Petersburg takes between one and two hours. It is about 44 km. (EXPRESS IN MILES)The subway ticket in St. Petersburg costs 20 rubles. There are trams in St. Petersburg. The tram ticket (ALSO) costs also 20 rubles. Today, I watched (A) video about trams. In (THE) (SIXTIES) 60-ies (A) tram ticket was cost 4 kopecks (1 ruble has 100 kopecks). Children (WHOSE HEIGHT WAS ONE METER OR LESS) lower one meter were going by tram free. (COULD RIDE FOR FREE) The growth of the children (WAS) measured in the tram:) The bus ticket costs between 20 and 50 (RUBLES). Today 1 USD = (IS WORTH) 29 RUB and 1 EUR = 40 RUB. How much does transport cost in your town? 

    Not too bad. Keep it up.
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  • Sharky
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    The trip from northern to southern St. Petersburg takes between one and two hours. It is about 44 km. The subway ticket in St. Petersburg costs 20 rubles. There are trams in St. Petersburg. The tram ticket also costs 20 rubles. Today, I watched a video about trams. In the 60's a tram ticket was cost 4 kopecks (1 ruble has 100 kopecks). Children under one meter went free. The height of the children was measured on the tram:) The bus ticket costs between 20 and 50. Today 1 USD = 29 RUB and 1 EUR = 40 RUB. How much does transport cost in your town?

    Very good Lina

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  • mosaikmum
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    The trip from northern to southern St. Petersburg takes between one and two hours. It is about 44 km. The A subway ticket in St. Petersburg costs 20 rubles. There are also trams in St. Petersburg. The and a tram ticket costs also 20 rubles too. Today, I watched a video about trams. In 60-ies the sixties, a tram ticket was cost 4 kopecks (1 ruble has equals 100 kopecks). Children lower shorter than one meter were going could travel by tram for free. The growth of the children was measured in the tram :) The A bus ticket costs between 20 and 50 rubles. Today 1 USD = 29 RUB and 1 EUR = 40 RUB. How much does transport cost in your town?

    Hi Lina,

    I think you've made a fine effort with this exercise. Keep up the good work!

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