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Anglais Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 101, Unité 2, Leçon 1

Décrire des objets

Instructions : Décrivez un ensemble d'objets situés sur une table. Décrivez un autre ensemble d'objets situés dans une boîte. Ex. : Les fleurs sont sur la table et les bonbons sont dans la boîte.

Luciana Delmeni... soumission: Evaluation moyenne:
In the morning yesterday I was studying English at Livemocha. In the afternoon I was working in a scouts group.
Submitted over a year ago

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Corrections

  • Aravind
    Mochapoints: 3729  |  score d'enseignant: 1878 (0%)
    See this for Example...."Yesterday Morning I was learn English in Livemocha and afternoon I Worked in the Scouts Group"
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Tony the Tiger
    Mochapoints: 7515  |  score d'enseignant: 6914 (0%)
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Tony the Tiger
    Mochapoints: 7515  |  score d'enseignant: 6914 (0%)
    Yesterday morning, I studied English on Livemocha. In the afternoon, I was working..... Sorry, I'm not sure how to correct the last part of your sentence. I don't know what a "scout group" is.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Robert
    Mochapoints: 13981  |  score d'enseignant: 4011 (100%)
    Yesterday morning I was studying... Yesterday morning I studied... Either one is correct. It would be more common to use "i was studying" when describing something else that happened at that time. "I was studying English on Livemocha when my friend called. at Livemocha on Livemocha os dois sao iqual, "on" might be more common in the EUA. In the afternoon, I was working in a scouts group. -It might be better to also describe what the scout group was doing - "working in a scout group on a service project". Your sentence implies you are a member of the group, you are "in" the group. If you had written "I was working with.." it would imply your job was to lead the group.
    Submitted over a year ago

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