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Anglais Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 101, Unité 2, Leçon 3

Que font les personnes ?

Instructions : En utilisant à la fois des attributs positifs et négatifs, décrivez ce que six personnes font : une femme, un homme, une fille, un garçon, vous et moi. Ex. : Je mange de la nourriture à la table. Je ne dors pas dans le lit.

刘丽 soumission: Evaluation moyenne:
I now wear the skirt,It is the red.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • jemmy
    Mochapoints: 742  |  score d'enseignant: 99 (0%)
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • jemmy
    Mochapoints: 742  |  score d'enseignant: 99 (0%)
    I wear the skirt now, It is the red.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • aopaq
    Mochapoints: 4089  |  score d'enseignant: 2231 (100%)
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • aopaq
    Mochapoints: 4089  |  score d'enseignant: 2231 (100%)
    Good effort! However, you do not need to refer to skirt and red with a preceding "the." By saying "the skirt," it implies you have a very special one that everybody knows about. If this is not true, then you could say "a skirt." Here is my suggestion for your submission: I am wearing a red skirt. OR I now wear a skirt. It is red. Happy practising and hope you post more submissions!
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Iwan Santos
    Mochapoints: 554  |  score d'enseignant: 105 (0%)
    I think so,that you can use better the sentence I´m wearing now,a skirt.It´s your color is red.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • David
    Mochapoints: 19150  |  score d'enseignant: 14686 (98%)

    Good try,

    I am now wearing a red skirt 

     

     

     
    Submitted over a year ago
  • John
    Mochapoints: 6969  |  score d'enseignant: 6549 (100%)

    Hello,

    In this exercise you were asked to describe what six (6) people are doing but you have just described one - yourself. 

    Perhaps you could write something like this:  I am wearing a red skirt, not black trousers.  The girl is walking out the door, not climbing the stairs.  The man is driving his car, not riding his bicycle.  The boy is playing football, not reading his book.  I am having a haircut, I am not eating my lunch.

    Does this help you and explain the negative and positive characteristics of different people?

    I hope I have been of help to you.

    Kind regards,

    John
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Ru/e
    Mochapoints: 17626  |  score d'enseignant: 6757 (100%)

    ... but if the person you are speaking to actually knows about the skirt (suppose you are on the phone), you can say "I now wear a skirt, it is the red one"
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  • hhuuhhaa
    Mochapoints: 1113  |  score d'enseignant: 42 (0%)

    ...比如说''我穿着那件我最喜爱的红色衣服''，可以说I am wearing the red skirt I most like。如果是''我穿着红色衣服''可以说I am wearing a red skirt
    Submitted over a year ago
  • aamir khan
    Mochapoints: 150  |  score d'enseignant: 27 (0%)

    hi jalalia089@yahoo.com
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Tinga15
    Mochapoints: 4369  |  score d'enseignant: 984

    Everyon in this room is wearing something red so I've decided i'm going to wear a gorgeous red shirt.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • senthil123in
    Mochapoints: 202  |  score d'enseignant: 13 (0%)

    i don't know what to say.

    i am now wearing red clour skirt.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • karolssantana
    Mochapoints: 288  |  score d'enseignant: 40 (0%)

    現在我穿紅色的裙子。

    now I wear a red skirt.

    agora eu vesti a saia vermelha.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Ivan
    Mochapoints: 6164  |  score d'enseignant: 4383 (100%)

    Good job!

    See the David's comments and... good lucky!

    If you can, please adds me in your Livemocha's friendlist. My adress is romaezapzul@yahoo.com.br

    Thanks!

    Ivan
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  • topgun889
    Mochapoints: 284  |  score d'enseignant: 184 (0%)

    If I were you, I will write: " I am wearing a skirt.  It is red and beautiful.  I am also a very beautiful girl."   Anyway, it is a very nice try.  Keep going! You can do it!
    Submitted over a year ago
  • rattanak sorpho...
    Mochapoints: 1249  |  score d'enseignant: 226

    hi, how are you ? and what high do you studying ?
    Submitted over a year ago

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