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Anglais Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 101, Unité 1, Leçon 1

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Instructions : Dites nous comment vous vous appelez, d’où vous venez, où vous habitez, quelle est votre profession, etc.

hanzee soumission: Evaluation moyenne:
MARK is a singer of the Westlife. He is tall and young. He's very rich, I guess.
I am hearing the westlife's music.
Submitted over a year ago

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Corrections

  • Jeff Jackson
    Mochapoints: 1163  |  score d'enseignant: 369 (0%)
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Jeff Jackson
    Mochapoints: 1163  |  score d'enseignant: 369 (0%)
    Mark is a singer for Westlife. He is tall and young. He's probably very rich. I'm listening to Westlife's music right now.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Vuqar
    Mochapoints: 3337  |  score d'enseignant: 2154 (0%)
    Ni hau I am LISTENING TO ............
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Фернандо जोएल
    Mochapoints: 13534  |  score d'enseignant: 5752 (100%)
    Submitted over a year ago
    Orthographe:
  • Фернандо जोएल
    Mochapoints: 13534  |  score d'enseignant: 5752 (100%)
    Vas bastante bien, continua así.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Erik.
    Mochapoints: 131036  |  score d'enseignant: 122678 (100%)
    Congratulations on having completed this writing exercise, it is quite well done! As other users have already left you very useful commentary, I would encourage you simply to continue practicing your writing keeping three things in mind: (1) Always work on improving and expanding your linguistic repertoire, in both vocabulary and grammar, (2) Always respect the rules of capitalization, punctuation, and spelling, (3) Always think the subject through thoroughly, answering completely and appropriately to the question asked. Best of luck with your future studies!
    Submitted over a year ago
  • bigharry
    Mochapoints: 1003  |  score d'enseignant: 27 (0%)
    You can also say... Mark is a good singer. He is a member of the band called westlife. He stands out in the group because of his height and looks. Probably he is rich because of his successfull career in the music industry. I love listening to their music. Take note: No need to capital all letters when it's a name...Not MARK....just "Mark". Use "their music" because you used westlife..which is a band/ group *** I hope my comments helps you in a way.
    Submitted over a year ago
  • hanzee
    Mochapoints: 781  |  score d'enseignant: 83 (0%)
    Jeff Jackson\Vuqar\ferjo1987 \Erik. and bigharry: thanks for your comments
    Submitted over a year ago

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