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Anglais Ecrit exercice (Tous les niveaux)

Cours 202, Unité 10, Leçon 5

Décrivez les outils chez vous

Instructions : Listez quelques outils que vous avez chez vous. Que sont-ils ? Où est-ce que vous les avez achetés ? Est-ce que vous les utilisez souvent? Quel outil avez-vous utilisé le plus récemment et pourquoi?

Rafael soumission: Evaluation moyenne:
Today it's March 24th, 2009. It's not a special day neither in Madrid nor in Spain. So that I'm working now. (or I'm trying to work).
It's sunny, although it' s a little cold.
I don't know what weather will be tomorrow. But, I believe, the weather will be similar to today.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • Charlie
    Mochapoints: 5235  |  score d'enseignant: 2714 (0%)

    Today it is March the 24th, 2009. It is not a special day neither in Madrid nor in Spain. Therefore I am working now. (or I am trying to work). It is sunny, although it is a little cold. I do not know what weather will be tomorrow. But, I believe, the weather will be similar to today.
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Sinem~
    Mochapoints: 12660  |  score d'enseignant: 3390 (49%)
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Alex
    Mochapoints: 9518  |  score d'enseignant: 2552 (0%)

    Very well
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Jay
    Mochapoints: 7746  |  score d'enseignant: 5245 (0%)

    Charlie's correction are very good. You are doing well,keep it up! J
    Submitted over a year ago
  • sayuri
    Mochapoints: 1861  |  score d'enseignant: 1313

    Today it's March 24th, 2009. It's not a special day neither in Madrid nor in Spain. So   so that I'm working now (or I'm trying to work). It's sunny, although it' s a little cold. I don't know what the weather will be tomorrow. But, I believe, the weather will be similar to today.

     

    Great job!
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Ingrid
    Mochapoints: 8773  |  score d'enseignant: 2277 (0%)
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Theta30
    Mochapoints: 24465  |  score d'enseignant: 21404 (97%)

    It's not a special day in Madrid or Spain.

     
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Zibs
    Mochapoints: 14655  |  score d'enseignant: 3870 (0%)

    Today it's March 24th, 2009. It's not a special day either in Madrid or in Spain (Or: It is a special day neither in Madrid nor in Spain) , so [that - optional] I'm working now (no comma) (or I'm trying to work). It's sunny, although it's a little cold. I don't know what the weather will be like tomorrow. But (no comma) I believe (no comma) the weather will be similar to today's.  (More natural: But I believe it will be similar to today's).

    PS Charlie has turned it into formal English; you can also simply say "Today is March..."
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Tony
    Mochapoints: 80322  |  score d'enseignant: 68461 (99%)

    Good job!  I would write it as follows:

    Today is March 24th, 2009. It's not a special day in Madrid or in Spain, so I'm working now (or I'm trying to work). It's sunny, although it's a little cold. I don't know what the weather will be tomorrow but I believe the weather will be similar to today.
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Esraa elmasry
    Mochapoints: 2698  |  score d'enseignant: 1815 (98%)

    Very good ;)

    Keep it up
    Submitted over a year ago
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